The Littlest Raindrop

by Max Elliot Anderson –

Way up high in the sky, higher than the birds go by, higher than airplanes fly, higher than you can see with your eye, lived the littlest raindrop you’ve ever seen. Her name was Stephanie. She was so small she wouldn’t even wet your whistle if she fell. That’s because, in all of history, there has never been such a small raindrop in all the clouds.

The cloud where she lived floated ever so slowly over the state of Texas. And as far as Stephanie knew, no raindrops of any size had fallen from her cloud for weeks and weeks.

Meanwhile, down on a ranch below, lived the family of Abigail Pritchard. Abby’s father bought his ranch only a few years ago. And ever since that time, it almost never rained on his land. Abby noticed that all the grass, for as far as she could see in any direction, had long ago turned from deep lush green to a sickly shade of brown.

It wouldn’t have been quite so bad if the weather had only been dry, but it was hot, too. Really hot. When the wind blew, it felt like a blowtorch against Abby’s skin. All day long she went to the kitchen to get a tall glass of cool water. During the hottest time of the day, she liked to pour her water over crackling ice and hold the cool glass against her burning cheek. “Ahhh!” she sighed. Then she took another refreshing gulp of that ice cold treat.

It might not seem like it, but things back on Stephanie Raindrop’s cloud weren’t a whole lot better. That’s because some of the other, larger raindrops made fun of her.

“You’re so small,” one of them told her. “You wouldn’t be enough to give a mosquito a drink.”

“Yeah,” another said as he pointed to a great big raindrop. “Now you take Harold over there. He’s so big and fat, when it comes time for him to go he can wash a whole car all by himself.” The others laughed, but Stephanie didn’t, and Harold didn’t either. Still, Harold did everything he could to try and fit in. It made Stephanie sad. She bent her head down and she would have cried except she was even too small to form a single tear.

Down at the ranch, Abby had gone into the barn to escape the sun’s punishing, baking rays. She hadn’t been there long when she heard a pickup truck drive into the lane. She scampered up to the second level where big bales of hay were stacked high so she could see who it was. But that’s when she heard the barn door open followed by voices. One of them was her father.

“I’m doing the best I can,” he said. “Surely there are other ranchers just as bad off.”

“Yes there are,” another voice said. “But that doesn’t change the fact that if we don’t get our money, we’ll have to close y’all down.”

Abby peaked out to see that it was Mr. Bentley from the bank. He’d been to the ranch several times before, and each time he came out, he asked for money. Mr. Bentley wore the biggest tan ten-gallon hat anyone in these parts of Texas had ever seen. He had on a light blue shirt, blue jeans with a big, silver buckle, and brown alligator cowboy boots.

“Look Mr. Bentley,” her father said, “I need more time, that’s all. It has to rain, it’s just got to. Then everything will be all right.”

Mr. Bentley spit in the dirt and looked up again. “Tell you what. If we get just one drop of rain by next Friday, you got yourself six more months. But if it doesn’t, then the bank’s taking your ranch.”

When Abby heard that, she fell backward into a pile of loose hay. She held her breath for the next few seconds, hoping no one heard her. Nobody did. A few moments later, the two men left the barn. Abby hurried over to an open window to watch Mr. Bentley drive away. Her father walked back into the house. She scampered down rickety wooden steps, dashed out the door, and ran to the back door of her house. Then, as quiet as a tumbleweed, she opened the door and slipped inside. She could already hear her parents talking.

“He says we have to leave the ranch if it doesn’t rain by next Friday.”

Her mother’s voice trembled. “But it hasn’t rained here in…months.”

“I know it,” her father sighed. “There’s simply nothing more you or I can do about it except watch and wait.”

“I guess you’re right. Where’s Abby?”

“Right here,” she answered, bounding into the kitchen. Pretending she didn’t hear anything she added, “What’s for lunch?”

The next few days around the ranch felt hotter than ever to Abby. It was so hot she decided to spend most of her time inside. I wonder how the animals can stand it out there, she thought. She looked out a side window where she could see small groups of cows standing or lying in the shade of the few trees that still dotted the ranch.

Weeks ago, a small stream running through the property had dried up. Even their pond now held only a little water. Soon it’d be all gone, too. Mud in the pond that used to be covered with cool refreshing water, now cracked and split into pieces from the sun, wind, and lack of rain.

Back on the cloud, Stephanie should have lived without a care, just waiting for her time to leave. For some reason, that hadn’t happened yet.

When her mother saw her sitting and pouting one afternoon, she went over to talk with her. “What’s wrong, Stephanie?”

The little raindrop looked up and sniffled. She still couldn’t make any tears. “The other raindrops keep making fun of me.”

“About what?”

“They say I’m too small to do anyone any good, that’s what.” She hung her little head again.

Her mother leaned up against her. “That’s nonsense. It doesn’t matter if you’re short or tall, big or small, anyone can make a difference if they try.”

Stephanie slowly looked into her mother’s eyes. “Even me?”

Her mother smiled. “Especially you. Why not?”

“But…”

“You just stop listening to anyone who tries to say you can’t. Those raindrops have no idea what they’re talking about.” She left Stephanie alone again.

Soon one of the larger raindrops saw her sitting by herself. “Hey, look,” Sid said. “It’s the runt.” Sid was so big, as he sloshed toward her some of the drops of water that fell off were even bigger than all there was of Stephanie.

She glared back at him. “Why don’t you dry up, Sid?”

He laughed back. “Hey, the puny raindrop made a joke.”

At the ranch, Abby had begun doing something every night. She waited until her parents had gone to bed and then she crept down stairs, out the back door, and slipped into the darkness in her nightgown and slippers. Even after dark, the night air continued to feel hot as fire and dry as ashes. She folded her hands, looked up into a cloudless sky, closed her eyes, and said, “Please, please, pleeease rain!” She stood there a few moments more, then returned to her bed for the rest of the night.

But on this night, Stephanie was awakened on her cloud at the exact same time. All she heard, though, was pleeease. She sat up in her soft, puffy bed. “Who could that be?” she whispered.

Each morning Abby jumped out of her bed at the ranch, hurried to the window, threw open the curtains, and looked out. And each morning she had to let out a deep breath she’d been holding since her head left the pillow. “Nothin’ yet.”

As she went downstairs and passed by her father’s office, she heard him on the phone. “By the end of this week, it looks like I’ll be needing to sell you all my cattle and horses.” There was a long silence. “Well, it’s because the bank’s gonna take the place, that’s why.”

Silence again. Then he said, “It’s just gotta rain!” He hung up the phone and Abby hurried away.

Later she found him outside by his pickup truck. She walked over and wrote her name in the dust on the door then sat down on the running board. “When we gonna wash this thing? It’s so dirty.”

Her father shook his head and sat beside her. “Can’t spare the water.”

“Is it really that bad?”

“Yes it is. Your mother and I have been talking. We think it might be a good idea for you to start getting some of your things ready to pack.”

Abby nearly leaped to her feet. “Leaving? You mean we’re leaving?”

He looked toward the sky and shaded his eyes from the sun. “Yep. Unless you can make it rain.” He lowered his head, looked back, and smiled at Abby.

Big salty tears welled up in her eyes. “But I like it here.”

“Me, too, but I don’t see any other way out.” Her father reached over and brushed the tears from her cheeks and smiled. “Now, if you could only make it rain like that, we’d be just fine.”

Abby looked down at the moist places where he tears had fallen in powder-dry dust.

On the cloud, Stephanie shuffled around with her head hung low, still too small to make a tear of her own. “I’ll never get ta do anything important,” she muttered.

She tried to stay away from the others, but their cloud really wasn’t big enough for a raindrop to hide for very long. So every day, from the time the sun came up until it went down again in the evening, she had to listen to all those insults.

“Pay no attention to the other raindrops,” her mother kept telling her. “One day you’ll see. You’re going to do something very important. I can feel it.”

Finally the littlest raindrop had had just about enough. “I gotta come up with a plan,” she said one afternoon. But Stephanie was the only raindrop to hear it.

On the ranch Abby had her own desperate feelings. What could she do to help her parents save their home? She had stopped swimming in the cool stream and pond weeks ago. She was careful not to let the water run in the sink. If she found a faucet dripping, she turned it off. She even used less ice in her water. Her mother had stopped watering her flowers, too. And all the vegetables in their garden had already dried up and blown to Kansas.

After dark on Thursday night, just as she had done so many nights before, Abby slipped downstairs toward the darkness in her back yard. But on her way this time, she heard the faint sounds of her mother crying. That put a lump in her throat that was hard to swallow. She hurried out the back door, looked toward the sky, folded her hands, closed her eyes, and said, “Please rain, please rain, pu…leeease rain!” As with all those other nights, when she opened her eyes, nothing happened.

Nothing, that is, except for high up on the cloud where Stephanie stayed awake extra late on this night. She clearly heard every word Abby had said. “So that’s it,” Stephanie whispered. She eased back down onto her soft pillow as a very, very small tear spilled out, ran down her cheek, and splashed on her pillowcase. She blinked twice, then said, “Now I know exactly what to do.”

When Abby woke up, she wished this day would never come, but it did come, and it was Friday. In the kitchen, her mother wiped away tears with her apron when Abby walked in for breakfast. About an hour later, she heard someone drive up to the house. Her heart pounded as she hurried to the window to see who it was. Of course, she already knew.

A big, shiny, black pickup truck came to a stop. Dust swirled in the air. Abby’s father walked over to it as the doors opened. Out stepped Mr. Bentley, but he wasn’t alone. This time he’d brought the sheriff along with him. Abby noticed that, just like before, Mr. Bentley again wore his tan, ten-gallon hat, a blue shirt, blue jeans, a big silver belt buckle, and brown, alligator cowboy boots. She hurried outside to hear what would happen next.

From behind a small hedge next to the house she heard the banker say, “Well Mr. Pritchard, today’s the day.”

Abby’s father stared at the ground. “Guess it is.”

Back up on the cloud, Stephanie was about to put her plan into action. This time, she went looking for the others and didn’t wait for them to find her. When she saw Sid she stopped, put her hands on her hips, and said, “Hey, Sid, you big drip.”

Sid spun around and glared back at her. “Who you callin’ a big drip?”

She pointed right at him. “You!”

“Come on, guys,” he shouted to some of the other big drops. Then he shook his fist. “You’ll pay for this,” and he started running toward Stephanie. She turned and ran as fast as a little raindrop can run toward the edge of the cloud. When she got there, she didn’t even try to stop. Instead, she jumped as far as she could and began falling toward the ground. When she turned and looked up, she could hardly believe what she saw. The other, bigger raindrops were so angry, they didn’t stop either. All of them ran right off the cloud and began falling after her.

Down below, the sheriff reached into this shirt pocket and pulled out a fist full of papers. “You gotta sign these Mr. Pritchard. Then you, your wife, and the little girl will have to pack up and leave.”

Abby’s father was a brave man. He could have, but he didn’t cry. He didn’t fight either. He reached out, took the papers, a pen the sheriff handed him, and prepared to sign away the happiest place on earth to Abby and her family. But before her father could do that, something amazing happened.

Without any rain clouds in the sky that Abby could see, the littlest raindrop landed on the brim of Mr. Bentley’s ten-gallon hat, splashed into a million pieces, and evaporated into the hot, dry air.

“What was that?” her father asked.

“What was what?” Mr. Bentley asked. Then he turned his head to look into the sky…big mistake. When he did, all those bigger raindrops chasing after Stephanie reached the end of his nose and watered the ground all around where the men stood. But that wasn’t the worst of it.

Harold was the last one to leave the cloud. When he hit the banker, he knocked that ten-gallon hat clean off of his head.

“Well,” the sheriff said with a chuckle. “Looks like rain to me.” He took the papers back and ripped them up.

A few days later, Abby was awakened by something she hadn’t heard for months. From the time on her bedroom clock, it should have been bright and sunny outside. Why’s it so dark, she wondered. Suddenly there was a flash of light followed by ear-splitting thunder. And that was followed by rain. She hurried downstairs and found her parents dancing in the back yard as rain soaked their clothes and mud covered their feet.

Abby ran out to catch some of that delicious rain on her tongue. She looked toward the sky, closed her eyes, folded her hands, and said, “Thank you, thank you, thaaank you!”

Her father joined her, put a hand on her shoulder, and said, “And all it took was one little raindrop to get the whole thing started.”

the end.


Question Time

  1. Why was the littlest raindrop sad?
  2. What did the banker tell the Pritchards?
  3. What did Abby wish for every night?
  4. How did the littlest raindrop save the ranch?
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